David

= Davids portfollio =

**Pieces of a poem**
//Subordinating conjunction--- //When i was done riding my bike //Prtoc// //epotion// ****inside my house i started //Cordinating conjuction---//to ride outside for //Dependant clause// an hour //Adverb clause// -then i tightend my chain so t didnt fall off //Independant// clause-- and continued riding around the block //Independant clause// --until i herd my name and started heading back //Compound-complex// --I put my bike away,locked it and opened the door to go eat dinner

**Prepotition poem**
1-Through the tunle 2-On my bike 3-Past the park 4-On the jump 5-above the grass 6-Over side walk 7-Turning around to do it again

Exstended metaphor
The dog was a tornato tearing everything up in his way.

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= Short Storie =

I opened the school doors to leave no one is at the school 40 minutes after the bell I had detention .Thinking to myself this is going to be fun riding home alone, my friends would never wait 40 minutes for me. I unlocked my bike hopped on it and started to ride, I’m going to think twice before I stick pencils into the roof of the school hallways. I made it home after 20 minutes of riding I lied to my dad and said I took the long way home .I laid down listening to music then out of nowhere “Josh”! I jumped up to the sound of my name. I made it to my dad’s room and replied “what” he turned from the computer “want to tell me why my computer has a virus” I looked at him and said I Don’t know he gave me a mad look and said if you’re lying to me you’re going to be in big trouble I replied with a "yes sir" and started walking away then he said “go to the store and get me some spaghetti for dinner please." “ Ok I said I’ll be right back. I hopped on my bike and started riding to Albertsons I made it and locked up my bike to the bike rack. I walked down to the doors and they didn’t open I pushed them open and walked inside and it was quiet and I didn’t see anybody in sight it was almost like I was in a ghost town. I walked and thought to myself is Albertsons closed today did I just break in? I got to the spaghetti and went to the self-checkout I paid got my recipte and I wanted to leave but I also wanted to find out what was going on. I walked closer to the freezer and heard a voice and a guy came out with a pistol pointed at me I dropped my spaghetti and walked to where he pointed I sat on the cold floor next to a bunch of people. I was scared I wanted my spaghetti and to leave. Two of the three guys were watching us in the freezer.

The third guy came he had a pillow case that was stuffed with the money from all the cash registers. They left the freezer like dogs after steak. I heard the foot steps and they started to fade as they got further away I got up slowly and peeked around the corner grabbed the spaghetti and went to the door that led to the bike rack and unlocked my bike.I started riding home as fast as I could I got home and my dad was staring at me he said “what toke you so long” I said this crazy thing happened I got held hostage he looked at me and laughed and said “you always have a way to come up with excuses” I opened my eyes wide and said “dad I'm not joking”you’re in trouble he interrupted you lied to me about the computer I said "I know I’m sorry but you have to listen to me I got held hostage" he interrupted me again and said go to your room. I felt stupid for lying to my dad before because now he doesn't trust me or believe me.