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Prepostion poem:
On our way Off we go Through the air In the seat Up and Down we go Riding a roller coaster.

Pieces of a Poem Poem:
Because it was cold this morning, on went my coat. **Even though I had my coat on I still was cold but** **, all of a sudden, burrrrr, a cold breeze blew right through me .** __ My coat is big. __ But keeps me warm. But while I was putting on my coat, __I notice something, it had a hole in it’s arm__. I was sad. Prepesition Subordinating Conjunction Cordinating Conjunction DC underline means IC  Bold is compund complex sentence

Hint Fiction
I love to listen to music. I listen to music all the time, when I walk place, at home, after I do my homework, and more. I can’t during school but that’s ok. I listen to it on my i-pod. Today was a good day to listen to music. I only listen to cool songs. I play most of my music outside of school. My i-pod died so I put it on the charger. I was leaving my house so I put on a sweater.

Blitscution review
Origanal post: The book that I am reading is "What my girlfriend doesnt know" by Sonya Sones. My friend recamended that I read the book. The story mostly takes place at school and around the main characters house. The main character's name is Sophie, she is dating a guy named,Robin Murph. Robin Murph isnt all that popular and he gets picked on alot. If someone does something wrong or stupied they say," Don''t be a Murph." Almost everyone is making fun of Sophie for going out with him, but she doesnt care. She even lost two or her best friends. This book is about me. It tells the story of what happens when, after almost 15 pathetic years of loserdom, the girl of my dreams finally falls for me. The book is narrated by Robert Murphy. This book tells storys about his life and how he and Sophie spend their time together. I would recamend this book to girls mostly because its kind of a romantic story in a way. What my girlfriend dosent know by Sonya Sones is narrorated by one of the main charactors, Robin Muphy, also know as Murph. It tells a story of what happens in his life if it has to do with his girlfriend of his every day life. When anyone around school says or does something that they dont think is cool they would say "Don't be such a Murph" Using Murph which is his last name as an insult. Robin Murphy was afraid that even after High School people would still be using his last name as an insult. Robin dosent get noticed at school unless if someone is insulting him. He got noticed alot more when he started giong out with Sophie. Sophie has friends that think that she is making the wrong desition in going out with him but she dosent care. She likes Robin and wants to be with him even though she knows that it is costing her two of her best friends that she knows has been there for her from the very beggining Revised post. The book that I amcurrently reading is titled " What my girlfriend dosent know." This book was recemended to me by a good friend who thought that I would enjoy all of the girly drama. I desided to try it and i am enjoying it. This story takes place alot at the main charactors HIgh School. The main charactors names are Sophie and Robin Murphy. Sophie is dating Robin and is constently being teased about it. She donsent let it fase her. Murphy is a word that their classmates used to insult people. When someone does something that they dont think is cool or did something idiotic, classmates say "dont be such a Muphy" Even though he dosent show it at school he dosent like it when people say it and he hears it. He dosent get attention at school other than if someone is teasing him, making fun of him. He starts getting noticed when he starts going out with Sophie. They started going out during the summer and when school started Sophie sort of got teased for dating him. If she hear someong making fun of her or Robin she would stand up and say something.Even though she is getting teased by her best friend she stays next to his side. She choose to be with him even though she knows that it costs her her two best friends that she had know and have been there for her forever. This book is writen from Robin's point of view and also narrated by him. This book tells a story about his life weather it has to do with Sophie his girlfriend or his life away from her. Its a pretty romanic story. I would recamend this book to mainly girls or people who like girl dramas.

Tone analysis
[|Anna Holmes: Charlie Sheen's abuse of women -- why don't people care?] After reading this artica about Charlie Sheen I have noted that the tone of the athuor towars this peace is shocked,upset,stunned to think anything like this would ever happen. no, women should be "hugged and caressed ﻿shows that the author is beeing anoyed. Mad that Charlie has hit a woman. No women should states her/his irritation for the facts.

Extended metaphor
The sun This sun is a desert, the heat rising, a steaming sidewalk, so hot your feet melf with every step. Boiling water, bubbles, bursting,heat rising The sun is a melted popsical on a hot summer's day. It's chile powder on a baby's tounge. The sun is the color R.E.D.

Digitial Vocabulary
Abominable- -adj; repugnant hate. [|Grinch] [|Scrooge]

rational: when thinking of the word abominable I thought of the grinch. I thought of the Grinch because he is repugnently hated by a lot of people. I also thought of Ebenezer Scrooge. I thought of scrooge because he is cranky people dont really like him.

Black out poem
Favorite Angels There are a lot in the world and are pretty They’re good, comfortable It’s obvious just think about it.

The Lullaby “Ring, Ring!” The phone rang. Jamie answered the phone only to get no answer on the other end. She thought nothing of it. Jamie was a fourteen years old with blond hair and blue eyes. She was babysitting Mr. and Mrs. Sims’ three year old boy, Tommy, who was already sleeping in his race car bed. Mr. and Mrs. Sims were out on their sixteenth anniversary. Suddenly, the door bell rings “ding dong,” Jamie leaps up from the couch while setting her book down on the coffee table to answer the door. When she finally gets to the door she slowly opens it only to find the midnight sky staring back at her and the full moon closer to the Earth than any other night. Again, she dismissed it and thought nothing of it. As she walked back to the couch to continue reading her book little did she know the events of the evening were about to change her life. Only a few minutes had passed when Tommy let out a loud shriek! Jamie hurriedly dashed up the stairs, throwing her book to the floor. When she got to Tommy’s bed side and looked over at him she saw him peacefully sleeping. She thought it odd, she could of sworn she heard him scream so she assumed he was sleep talking or having a nightmare. She put it in the back of her mind to ask his parents when they got back whether this was normal behavior for their son. On the way down the stairs Jamie heard whispering voices. She stopped to make sure she was not going crazy. Then she heard them again. At first she could not make out what the whispering voices were saying. She held her breath and for that split second she heard her name being called out in a low whisper. Scared, she did not make any noise until she noticed she had to take a breath of air. As she gasped for air she heard the voice give her a warning. Icy chills went up her spine as she realized that the whispers were telling her to get out before it was too late. Too scared to turn her head to see who or what was whispering to her, she went down the stairs as soon as possible to call Mr. and Mrs. Sims. When she was about to reach for the phone a dark shaped figure appeared before her. She realized there was no running away from this creature. She blinked several times just to make sure her eyes weren’t lying to her. That is when she realized that the creature staring back at her was a girl dressed in all black with pitch black hair and pitch black eyes that burned deep inside her sockets. Slowly as possible Jamie stepped back trying not to make any sound. Jamie was so scared she didn’t notice were she was going and bumped into the table by the door. The shadowy figured girl approached slowly towards Jamie singing what Jamie thought was a lullaby. Before she knew it, she was being dragged through the kitchen and into the ally. Babysitters were disappearing with out a trace all over the neighborhood. It went on for a few weeks until the few babysitters that were still around stopped babysitting because of the disappearances. There was one brave babysitter, his name was Chris. He was not scared of the myth of The Lullaby.Many believed that while teenagers are babysitting a mysterious girl appears to them and sings to them a lullaby putting them to sleep in their death bed. Before the mysterious girl attacks she makes the phone ring and then makes the door bell ring. That’s when you know that will be your last night alive. Rumors were going around that this mysterious girl was in their neighborhood, which explained the disappearances of all the babysitters.Chris was fifteen and in high school when all this occurred. Since Chris was the only babysitter available he was getting all the calls to go out and baby-sit. He was scheduled to baby-sit for Mrs. Robertson’s three children. Rick, and the two twins, Samantha and Elizabeth. Rick was five years old and Samantha and Elizabeth were both three. Chris had read stories in the daily newspaper. He read about the myth and how to recognize the signs of the myth. He knew everything he needed to know to ward off this so called myth. He was prepared. When he heard the phone ring he knew things were going to get bad. He knew that is how it all starts. He ignored the phone even though the Robertson s had instructed him to answer all phone calls. He thought that by ignoring the phone he would escape the myth. Later, when all of the kids were in bed and sleeping the door bell rang. Again, he ignored it. Maybe by doing so he could save himself some time. He knew he had to leave so he made his way to the phone to call the Robertson s to cut the night short before anything else happened. Before he was able to reach for the phone there she was, the legendary mysterious girl, The Lullaby, dress from head to toe in black. Chris quickly shoved ear plugs in his ears to block out the sound of the lullaby. As she started to move towards him he stood frozen with fear in his eyes. The hair on the back of his neck stood as a chill went through his body. They were now face to face. Chris couldn’t hear a thing. He realized that he had not even heard the whispers warning him to get out and wondered if The Lullaby was getting desperate as there were no more babysitters to take but him. A few minutes passed still frozen in his place eyes shut with fear, he could not bear it any longer and peeked thru one eye. To his surprise he did not see anything in front of him. He looked around and saw the dark creature curled up on the floor. When Chris thought it was safe he pulled out the ear plugs and new he had defeated The Lullaby. In the end the Lullaby that was putting babysitters to sleep finally laid herself to sleep in her own death bed by singing herself to her death.