Ian

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Prepositions Poem
Upon reading a book On my new //fancy// nook On the edge of my chair Within a big stuffed panda bear Between a boat I'm gonna eat a green goat On tuesday.

The tree
A tree is a forceful strong-hold a refuge for, many living things agenst the beasts of the wood the wrath of mother nature it is all they ever need the fruit of the tree the shelter of its leaves a high above place that is secure even though a tree is a fortress though not for war there are no guns no grenades but mabey thorns it is just mearly a place that is strong and some-what intimidating it is the ultamate castle.

**The tree**
A tree is a forcefull strong-hold a refuge for many living things agenst the beasts of the wood the wrath of Mother Nature it is all they ever need the fruit of the tree the shelter of its leaves a high above place that is secure a tree is a fortress though not for war no guns no grenades but mabey thorns its just mearly a place that is stong and some-what intimidating It is the ultimate castle

Hint fiction:
Look at the ship. Ive been preparing for months. Awaighting the moment when we set sail. What an adventures in store. I can't wait!

Tone Analysis
Phil collins retiring from music

In this article it is talking about Phil Collins' decition to retire from music. I think that the authors tone is sad and rather conclusive. Not in a bad way at all, it seemed like it was a grand finaly article. It use references like "Fans of Phil Collins may be begging for just "One More Night" now that the singing legend has announced that he's ready to retire from music." "One more night" was one of Phil Collins biggest hits and it gave me a scence of sorrow. Phil Collins said that while watching MTV and seeing all of the other "modern" musicians ,im assuming 93.1 type people, he fells that he cannot be in the same buisness as them. Hmm... I can't imagine why! :P This also makes you feel sad because he realized where music is going and he doesnt want a part of it. The classics are going away! It also talks about tissue and nerve damage in his hands. As a result of this he can hardly hold drum sticks anymore. He is worried adout being able to do every day household stuff like slicing bread. I know im supposed to talk about the tone and not the content but I would have to say that all of that was very negative and there wasn't much of anything that was positive in there. Is is a sad situation and they found a reporter who felt mutualy about the situation.

Original Post:
I am reading "The lion the Witch and the Wardrobe". It is about four siblings that move in with there uncle because of world war two. The find this wardrobe that leads to this other place were a bunch of stuff happens. Edmund decides to be a little jerk, Peter is a controll freak, lucy is over considorte and susan has no particular controbution to the story. Niether does Peter. ~"And now there was no mistaking it, and all four children stood blinking in the daylight of a winter day. Behind them were coats hanging on pegs, in front of them were snow-covered trees."~ To anyone who hates reality.

Revised Post:
I am currently reading "The lion the Witch and the Wardrobe". It is about four siblings that move in with there uncle because world war two is precticly going on in there back yard. They find this wardrobe in one of there uncles spair bedrooms that leads them into this magical land were a bunch of stuff happens. Edmund decides to be a little jerk, Peter is a controll freak, lucy is over considerate and susan has no particular contribution to the story. Niether does Peter.~"And now there was no mistaking it, and all four children stoodblinking in the daylight of a winter day. Behind them were coats hanging on pegs, in front of them were snow-covered trees."~ To anyone who hates reality.

Visual vocab.
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Portal
Portal: 1. A door, gate or other enterence to some other place.

Rational: I chose this picture because Narnias wardrobe was the first thing that came into my head when I thaght about it.

Part of speech: Adjective ==