Blitscsussion+revision

=Blitscussion Revision Requirements=

Now that you have a deeper understanding of how sentence structure and types affect meaning in writing, go back to an original post from our Edmodo Blitscussions wall and:
 * 1) Label a section in your portfolio called "Blitscussion Revision"
 * 2) Create a subsection called "Original Post"
 * 3) Paste your original post in that section
 * 4) Revise your original post to enhance meaning and create a unique voice by:
 * revising sentence structure--//maybe you wrote in long, run-on sentences; break them up where they need punctuation//.
 * revising sentence types--//maybe you wrote all simple sentences; revise them to make them complex or compound-complex.//
 * 1) Create a subsection called "Revised Post"
 * 2) Write your final draft in this section
 * 3) Where convenient and possible, color code your changes to indicate your revision; if color coding is too difficult or impractical, simply write a rationale for the changes you made, like you did for your Pieces of a Poem poem.