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Preposition Poem:
Victory On the sidelines As we cheer Upon the field Without a doubt About to score Before time runs out Our team scores and claims our victory

Pieces of a poem
Competition Because the anticipation was killing me To the mats our team went Our competition Which we lose, We tried our hardest but, we did not fail we still suceeded Because-Subordinating cunjunction Because the anticipation was killing me-Adjective clause

To-Preposition
Which we lose-dependent clause We tried our hardest but,-Dependent clause We did not fail we still suceeded-Indendent clause

Hint Fiction
My side of the story The story got crazy, You couldn't understand; couldn't take a hint About the problem I was telling you, Little did you know, it was fiction.

Extended metaphor
The Battle The gifts were battleing Yet a silent fight The words were knifes The list of possibilites of horrid death The Army was the sheild that saved every soul yet done so quietly it could've been the drop of a feather Yet the deathly stare has not gone through, The forever holding Army

Original Blitzcussion post
I am reading Impulse. The author is Ellen Hopkins and it is a really good book. The book appealed to me because i read the rest of the books by Ellen Hopkins and they are really good in my opinion. The story takes place in an institution for kids with depression. The book is in three diffeent points of view. One of the kids name is Vanessa and she cuts herself. another kids name is Connor and when he tries to kill himself he misses his heart with the gun. The last kids name is Tony and he is a boy that was in juninile detention center and he doesnt know where his choices may take him. Conner is a popular kind of guy who tried to kill himself because him and a tracher had an affair and she told the police. vanessa is bipolar and her mom sees angels and is kind of crazy. Tony is a street kid who is confused because he doesn't know if hes gay or not. I really enjoy this book because of hte atticipation that the book has. In this book you kind of worry about these kids and you always want to read more and not put the book down..... I recomend this book to anybody who likes Ellen Hopkins or the Crank series. Also to people who like to read real life stories.

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Revised Blitzcussion Post
I am reading the book Impulse by Ellen Hopkins The book appealed to me because of the theme of the rest of her books and they are great. The story takes place in an institution for people with problems.The first kids name is V anessa and she cuts herself and suffers from genetic bipolar and her mother is crazy and sees angels but Vanessa says 'demons'. The second kids name is Connor hes the popular 'jock' and when he tried to kill himself the bullet missed is heart. He tried to kill himself because he was having an affair with a teacher and the teacher couldn't stomach the guilt so she told. The last kids name is Tony and he is a boy that was in juninile detention center. He is a street kid who is confused about if hes gay or not because hes falling for Vanessa. I really enjoy this book because of the atticipation that the book has. In this book you worry about the kids and you always want to read more and never put the book down. I recommend this book to anybody who likes Ellen Hopkins or the Crank series or to people who like real life stories﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿.

Blackout Poetry
Helpless,

In the wake of the crisis,

Levels of struggle,

Crucial to the eliminated,

Exposed to suffering conditions,

Effort is made.

Digital Vocab
 Type of speech-noun Lemur- any of various small, arboreal, chiefly nocturnal mammals of the family Lemuridae, of Madagascar and the Comoro Islands.